mild spoilers
@Paradox certainly liking what i've read so far (c. 1)the first few paragraphs or so kind of read like addendum files for SCPs (087 came to mind), great descriptive writing there ^^
also, dialog heavy writing, very enjoyable
the magic aspect is super intriguing, it's cool that it works in opposition(?) to the physics based realm
did you have a mechanic in mind for how it works?
always have been a fan of rules-based magic, but of course, artistic freedom is way more important than reader suggestions
gonna have to copy the other chapters into my e-reader :p
something about fiction reads so much easier for me when it's paginated